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Showing posts with label Persuasive. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Persuasive. Show all posts

Wednesday, 11 August 2021

Valessa Unicorns (Fictional Persuasive Text)

 Valessa Unicorns should have the right to eat rotten ham in Mr Moran's stomach. Rotten ham has been banned all over the world and sadly because of that Valessa Unicorns are now an endangered species. Their home Mr Moran's stomach has been taken from them and they are now scattered over the world starving and needing proper nourishment. I believe we should unban rotten ham and let Valessa Unicorns go back to their home. 


69% of studies show that rotten ham is a great source of protein and vitamins for Valessa Unicorns. They contain Vitamin C and Vitamin D, the most healthy vitamins for Valessa Unicorns. It is best when roasted and can feed an entire clan of Valessa Unicorns with just 1 set of rotten ham. It also has healing capabilities never seen before such as replenishing health and stamina. They also slightly increase the strength of any Valessa Unicorns that consume it so not only will your Valessa Unicorn heal it will also get stronger than it was before. The rotten texture also helps Valessa Unicorn swallow the food faster and easier.   


 Mr Moran's Stomach is the only environment Valessa Unicorns can survive in.  Mr Moran's stomach has served as an environment although acidic is the perfect environment for Valessa Unicorns. The acid serves not only as material for playgrounds for Valessa Unicorns it also serves as water for Valessa Unicorns. They are already endangered but they are only going to die out and eventually go extinct if they do not have the acid from Mr Moran's stomach. It also counts as a way to bathe Valessa Unicorns helping them feel replenished after a long day of playing and running.


Valessa Unicorns can also feel a decrease in IQ without being in Mr Moran's Stomach.  Valessa Unicorns have an IQ of 6969 but if they are in an environment other than Mr Moran's stomach their IQ decreases by a rapid rate of 50%. That means they can go from being a genius with an IQ of 6969 to a mentally challenged amateur of 3484. If we want to keep Valessa Unicorns as the intelligent animals they are we must let them prosper in their rightful environment which is Mr Moran's stomach. They won’t be able to survive in any other environment with their IQ dropping vigorously by 50%.


In conclusion Valessa Unicorns should be able to eat Rotten ham , be in Mr Moran's stomach or else their IQ will decrease by 50%. With all this information in mind we should unban rotten ham and let Valessa Unicorns prosper in the environment they rightfully belong, which is Mr Moran's stomach.


Thursday, 29 July 2021

Should Schools Provide Lunches Everyday?

School lunches should be provided to students everyday. This is because of the unwarranted stress it gives to parents when buying lunches for their children. This can lead to a decrease in nutritional value of the lunch boxes and if your child does not eat the entirety of their lunch box you wasted all that money. I will go more in depth to why schools should provide school lunches everyday.



Parents have one of the most stressful jobs in the world which is raising a child. Raising children requires discipline and focus. You need to provide a roof and make sure your child becomes a respectable member of society. However, the stress of buying lunches for their children is unnecessary. My mum works from 5 am to around 3-4 pm and she doesn’t need the additional stress of providing food for my lunch at school. This will bring some weight off of our parents shoulders and help them focus on more important matters such as bills.




With parents being stressed out about buying lunches this can lead to a lunchbox full of very unhealthy food. This is because of how easy it is to buy unhealthy food such as oreos and baked pastries. With schools the strictness and standards will be upheld to give students more nutritional and healthy food. The students will gain more from this food that the school will provide and will help them last the day longer. As tasty as junk food is, healthy food’s benefits are much more important.





Sometimes parents don’t have the money to buy lunches for their kids. With school lunches every student from every room will be supplied a lunch. This will make every student have access to lunches so that way no one will be ignored. Also special lunches could be compensated to people with special needs in terms of food.  





In conclusion, schools will be able to take stress off of their students' parents shoulders , provide actual nutritional meals and make everyone have access to food even if the parents can’t buy lunch. Schools are educational however we need the fuel in order to take in that education. School lunches should be provided not only for the students well being but to lessen the burden on the parents so do you agree school should school lunches?

Wednesday, 28 July 2021

Persuasive Writing: Planning Stage

 


Task description
In this task we had to choose some questions from a document and then plan to write a persuasive piece of text out of it. I chose should schools provide lunches for students everyday?